MystifiedSnowPup
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 | | Subject: Re: Anzac Day Poem Sat Dec 20, 2008 8:43 pm | |
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~~Crimson~~
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| | Subject: Re: Anzac Day Poem Sat Dec 20, 2008 8:01 pm | |
| Very Good!!!
It may be different from what everyone else tends to write but I think thats why it makes it so good! | |
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MystifiedSnowPup
Number of posts : 2041
Age : 31
Location : The switch babiii
Registration date : 2008-12-02
| | Subject: Anzac Day Poem Sat Dec 20, 2008 7:53 pm | |
| So Umm my poem is a little different to what everyone else has been posting.This was a year seven school assignment that I wrote when I was 12.Well It took of rather well and I've shown it to the old diggers at the RSL.So I'm really proud of this one sure like I said it's different to what others put up,but considering I was 12 at the time the response I got from adults was somewhat overwhelming. [Yr 7 school assignment]
As I wake up in the morning I see bullets passing me one person falls over it’s a life or death situation
God help me
The guy in the bunker next to be is shot.
life and soul lost forever
I shiver from neck to toes
God help me
We have to change from the back line to the front
My friend slaps me on the back
that’s the last I saw of him
God help me
We fire at Johnny Turks Hit one hit two
I counted twenty-six dead
by my own fire arm
God help me
I hear a cry my friend is on the ground
I try to help I try to move my legs wont move
I wana ask him is he alright
No sound came from my mouth
God help me
I still see them all standing with me
By my side I feel guilt,
why couldn’t it have been me and not my friends why?
As I tell my grandchildren this story I hold back tears
God help them | |
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