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PostSubject: Re: The strength it takes   Sat Sep 18, 2010 7:59 pm

*claps* Yay!! Awesome poems! bounce
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PostSubject: Interested in your work...   Sat Sep 18, 2010 12:46 am

Hi i'm knew here but what does that matter other than im a nube..... Anyways, I find your poems interesting and deep. I hope you will post more. You may think its rather lame I find interest in your work. However you may take this I hopre you will post once again.
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PostSubject: ..., ...   Mon Feb 08, 2010 6:14 pm

Well if you have made it to this point, then I'm going to the pope and putting you up for saint hood.
This poem might actually make a little sense. Its about being away from someone and them missing you (which rarely happens in my case.)

I've probably missed someone this much, but I very highly doubt anyone has missed me this much. But I write poetry, and so its fiction, so I pretended like people actually want me to be around them, in any case here is the poem.


I'm bound away, but do not fret
for the wind is my hand, your face to caress
The sun is my arms
to wrap around you, and keep you warm

In the stillness of the night
my voice is the birds taking flight
I sent the moon to guide you
with silver light beams
I sent to stars to watch over you
softly in your dreams

In the summer heat
I am the steady waves
slowly mimicking your heart beat

In the winter chill
I am the soft white blanket
on the trees, on the hills

As I said my love I'm bound away
yet do not despair
close your eyes
I'm always there

So like I said, no one has ever actually missed me this much, or at all for that matter, but what ever, tell me the secret meaning and blah, blah, blah. I'm going to lay down and get a ct scan. you probably should to, cause you chose to read these out of your own will, which by now is messed up terribly. oh yea, leave a comment if you would, but I doubt you will.
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PostSubject: When will I stop? Who knows!   Mon Feb 08, 2010 6:12 pm

occ- your back for more?!? You are obviously more mentally unstable than me. Well I think you might begin to ask "Jarod why on earth have you been writing so many poems?" Well the answer is that some of my friends write short stories like they have no lives, which is almost a true statement. Any way, that has begun bugging the crap out of me, so I've tried to write short stories, but I'm too impatient. So I write poems cause they are short sweet and to the point. So what am I to do with the poems I write? well the answer is simple, shove them into the internet faces of my friends (or people who claim to know me for some odd reason.) but in any case here is the next poem. oh btw, I am roleplaying, I'm playing the role of a decent poet, and by reading these, you are obviously playing the role of a crazy person



I was told once not to write
I still never follow advice
I was once told do only right
but love makes the question a fight
for no one knew of it but her and I

The day, the season all come and go
the leaves change color for spring time grow
then the winter takes its night
for in the heaven's delight
for no one knew of it but her and I

The crystalline stars froze
in the darkness of the night
with needle in hand, she won the war
but lost the fight
for no one knew of it but her and I

The priest outside the in the yard that morn
a very brief illness of hate and of scorn
Ashes from ashes, from dust to dust
what is said to be right wrong or just
for no one knew of it but the father and I

I say this now to you my friend
listen my story from top to end
the short road the long road
they all must end
but no one knew of it but her and I

Like I said earlier, tell me if you find the deep hidden secret meaning so I can feel smart. If you are really feeling up to it, or lost a bet at the super bowl, or are drunk out of your wits, there is one more poem.
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PostSubject: In case you actually liked the last one.   Mon Feb 08, 2010 6:08 pm

occ- so I've been quite bored lately, and as any bored over-emotional teenager I write poetry. However, the strange twist is that unlike most people's crap they write about killing them selves when their boy-friend of 2 weeks breaks up with them, on occasion my crap is somewhat not crap. So here we go

This is a bit I wrote in physics, Mr.Shawler is a great teacher, but sometimes he tends to ramble, and I tend to get bored, so this a a physics masterpiece. Rare that something artful can come out of physics, but hey, that depends on your definition of "Artful."


it hangs in the air above the trees
it hangs in the fog above the seas
it holds its head while haunting me
its name is a synonym for serenity

I try to run
I try to fight
yet it follows me day and night
its name is a synonym for misery

it taints the fire that gives us light
it makes you re-think wrong from right
it chases you anytime any spite
its name is a synonym for majesty

it forces me to run and hide
it forces me to boldly stride
for a second it makes you smile
but for a life cry
its name is a synonym for catastrophe

it tries to get inside your soul
devour yourself as a whole
the poison sent from the heavens above
the name of this demon its name is love.


if you've read this far then you obviously have the patience of Job, well in any case if you have questions or think you've found the "meaning" tell me so I can think I'm smarter than I am. A few more poems are coming up, so if you really want to for some crazy reason, continue on, but really by now most of you will probably be feeling the strong urge to lie down.
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PostSubject: The strength it takes   Sat Feb 06, 2010 9:24 pm

occ -Hey guys, I've been on this site for a while, you probably have never heard of me but that's okay cause I'm utterly terrible at role-playing, but as some people know, I am good at poetry, so I decided to post one of my more recent success up hope you enjoy XD


weeping so softly

as radiant glows

stream from the window

and brightens her clothes



draped in beautiful white

I hold her hand

and cry quietly

I cannot sob for you see

she rests now in peaceful sleep



Slowly as her eyes open

so the world she may see

she slowly turns her head

and sweetly smiles at me



I grab your hand into my own

smile back and dry my tears

I put your hand next to my heart

my heart impounds

you giggle with a start



I say its alright

its me here and no other

your rest you need my dear

so for me return to slumber



she smiles so sweetly

to almost make me cry

she then returns to peaceful sleep

with the closing of her eyes.



I walk out of the room

with a very thin disguise

of the tears that I held back

and the pain in my eyes



for I would give the world

in this case

anything at all

to be in her place.

by EMP-my new poet pen name XD

occ-btw you can copy my stuff just say its mine, oh and I do like comments, so if you can give me a suggestion or say what you liked.
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