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Akari_Kanae
Number of posts : 589 Age : 25 Location : On the planet Cosplay (I'm the queen) Registration date : 2010-07-14
| Subject: Re: The strength it takes Sat Sep 18, 2010 7:59 pm | |
| *claps* Yay!! Awesome poems! | |
| | | taintedheart
Number of posts : 2 Age : 31 Registration date : 2010-09-17
| Subject: Interested in your work... Sat Sep 18, 2010 12:46 am | |
| Hi i'm knew here but what does that matter other than im a nube..... Anyways, I find your poems interesting and deep. I hope you will post more. You may think its rather lame I find interest in your work. However you may take this I hopre you will post once again. | |
| | | loringth3great
Number of posts : 13 Age : 29 Location : A hole in the ground in Georgia Registration date : 2010-01-10
| Subject: ..., ... Mon Feb 08, 2010 6:14 pm | |
| Well if you have made it to this point, then I'm going to the pope and putting you up for saint hood. This poem might actually make a little sense. Its about being away from someone and them missing you (which rarely happens in my case.)
I've probably missed someone this much, but I very highly doubt anyone has missed me this much. But I write poetry, and so its fiction, so I pretended like people actually want me to be around them, in any case here is the poem.
I'm bound away, but do not fret for the wind is my hand, your face to caress The sun is my arms to wrap around you, and keep you warm
In the stillness of the night my voice is the birds taking flight I sent the moon to guide you with silver light beams I sent to stars to watch over you softly in your dreams
In the summer heat I am the steady waves slowly mimicking your heart beat
In the winter chill I am the soft white blanket on the trees, on the hills
As I said my love I'm bound away yet do not despair close your eyes I'm always there
So like I said, no one has ever actually missed me this much, or at all for that matter, but what ever, tell me the secret meaning and blah, blah, blah. I'm going to lay down and get a ct scan. you probably should to, cause you chose to read these out of your own will, which by now is messed up terribly. oh yea, leave a comment if you would, but I doubt you will. | |
| | | loringth3great
Number of posts : 13 Age : 29 Location : A hole in the ground in Georgia Registration date : 2010-01-10
| Subject: When will I stop? Who knows! Mon Feb 08, 2010 6:12 pm | |
| occ- your back for more?!? You are obviously more mentally unstable than me. Well I think you might begin to ask "Jarod why on earth have you been writing so many poems?" Well the answer is that some of my friends write short stories like they have no lives, which is almost a true statement. Any way, that has begun bugging the crap out of me, so I've tried to write short stories, but I'm too impatient. So I write poems cause they are short sweet and to the point. So what am I to do with the poems I write? well the answer is simple, shove them into the internet faces of my friends (or people who claim to know me for some odd reason.) but in any case here is the next poem. oh btw, I am roleplaying, I'm playing the role of a decent poet, and by reading these, you are obviously playing the role of a crazy person
I was told once not to write I still never follow advice I was once told do only right but love makes the question a fight for no one knew of it but her and I
The day, the season all come and go the leaves change color for spring time grow then the winter takes its night for in the heaven's delight for no one knew of it but her and I
The crystalline stars froze in the darkness of the night with needle in hand, she won the war but lost the fight for no one knew of it but her and I
The priest outside the in the yard that morn a very brief illness of hate and of scorn Ashes from ashes, from dust to dust what is said to be right wrong or just for no one knew of it but the father and I
I say this now to you my friend listen my story from top to end the short road the long road they all must end but no one knew of it but her and I
Like I said earlier, tell me if you find the deep hidden secret meaning so I can feel smart. If you are really feeling up to it, or lost a bet at the super bowl, or are drunk out of your wits, there is one more poem. | |
| | | loringth3great
Number of posts : 13 Age : 29 Location : A hole in the ground in Georgia Registration date : 2010-01-10
| Subject: In case you actually liked the last one. Mon Feb 08, 2010 6:08 pm | |
| occ- so I've been quite bored lately, and as any bored over-emotional teenager I write poetry. However, the strange twist is that unlike most people's crap they write about killing them selves when their boy-friend of 2 weeks breaks up with them, on occasion my crap is somewhat not crap. So here we go
This is a bit I wrote in physics, Mr.Shawler is a great teacher, but sometimes he tends to ramble, and I tend to get bored, so this a a physics masterpiece. Rare that something artful can come out of physics, but hey, that depends on your definition of "Artful."
it hangs in the air above the trees it hangs in the fog above the seas it holds its head while haunting me its name is a synonym for serenity
I try to run I try to fight yet it follows me day and night its name is a synonym for misery
it taints the fire that gives us light it makes you re-think wrong from right it chases you anytime any spite its name is a synonym for majesty
it forces me to run and hide it forces me to boldly stride for a second it makes you smile but for a life cry its name is a synonym for catastrophe
it tries to get inside your soul devour yourself as a whole the poison sent from the heavens above the name of this demon its name is love.
if you've read this far then you obviously have the patience of Job, well in any case if you have questions or think you've found the "meaning" tell me so I can think I'm smarter than I am. A few more poems are coming up, so if you really want to for some crazy reason, continue on, but really by now most of you will probably be feeling the strong urge to lie down. | |
| | | loringth3great
Number of posts : 13 Age : 29 Location : A hole in the ground in Georgia Registration date : 2010-01-10
| Subject: The strength it takes Sat Feb 06, 2010 9:24 pm | |
| occ -Hey guys, I've been on this site for a while, you probably have never heard of me but that's okay cause I'm utterly terrible at role-playing, but as some people know, I am good at poetry, so I decided to post one of my more recent success up hope you enjoy XD
weeping so softly
as radiant glows
stream from the window
and brightens her clothes
draped in beautiful white
I hold her hand
and cry quietly
I cannot sob for you see
she rests now in peaceful sleep
Slowly as her eyes open
so the world she may see
she slowly turns her head
and sweetly smiles at me
I grab your hand into my own
smile back and dry my tears
I put your hand next to my heart
my heart impounds
you giggle with a start
I say its alright
its me here and no other
your rest you need my dear
so for me return to slumber
she smiles so sweetly
to almost make me cry
she then returns to peaceful sleep
with the closing of her eyes.
I walk out of the room
with a very thin disguise
of the tears that I held back
and the pain in my eyes
for I would give the world
in this case
anything at all
to be in her place.
by EMP-my new poet pen name XD
occ-btw you can copy my stuff just say its mine, oh and I do like comments, so if you can give me a suggestion or say what you liked. | |
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